Marsha’s feedback,

I did not have much time,

suggestions: think about grouping things together – I was talking to her as if I was in the room however I was all over the place. organization, telling that story

when? how did the events interrelate

so much potential with the visuals

organization – grouping and telling that story. richness and how I can organize this

2nd – digging deeper, going beyond the surface – I am good with surfaces – I am interested in feelings and color – what does that mean to me. these are my interests: because – ways on how to complicate that.

Rebranding on FÉ the complexity of the name – can I use this to encapsulate on the ethos and what the name means in different languages –

If you are using references, what is the context for myself and also the context in the course and where is the criticality coming in.

Complicating things – London is great place to live in – and shine the line on the issues happening. A class issue as well – how to be critical with it as well.

Encourage me to do – talk about all of these things that you won’t be able to go in depth, but why is it that why are these aspects super important to us.

When you’re talking about self-censorship – think about what can happen where. Just wanting to value the informality.

Can that journey help organize the thoughts and topics, ask yourself because – why is that significant to me.